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<del type="crossed out">Hij</del><add place="supralinear" rend="pencil">en</add> begaf zich aan critiek: : <add place="margintop" rend="red ink">10bis</add><metamark place="margintop">bis<note>halve cirkel rond 'bis'</note></metamark><lb/>
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Laat me U oprecht zeggen ,Sheherazade, dat <del type="crossed out">dit</del>,<lb/>
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uw <del type="crossed out">laatste verhaal</del> <add place="supralinear">" Tweesprong "</add> mij <del type="crossed out">"</del> minder<del>"</del> bevalt ... de <lb/>
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symboliek schijnt <del type="overwritten">n</del><add place="overwritten">m</add>e wat gezocht , <del>wat ge<unclear>XX</unclear></del>, <lb/>
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wat bij de haren getrokken. <del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del><add place="supralinear"><unclear>Het ontbeert</unclear></add> <add place="infralinear"><unclear> XXX</unclear></add> <del type="crossed out">weinig</del> drama-<lb/>
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tiek <del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del><add place="supralinear"><unclear>XXX</unclear></add> in , Er is geen climax <del type="crossed out">de <unclear>ontknoping</unclear></del> <lb/>
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is <del type="crossed out">zeer <unclear>vermoeid</unclear></del>. .<del type="overwritten">/</del><add place="overwritten">E</add>r <del type="overwritten">in</del><add place="overwritten">zit</add> ook ni<del type="overwritten">t</del><add place="overwritten">e</add>t veel plastische <lb/>
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Kunst <add place="supralinear">in</add><metamark place="inline">/</metamark><del type="overwritten">.</del> <unclear>Het</unclear> lijkt mij " <unclear>vermoeid</unclear>" geschreven. De literaire <lb/>
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waarde ervan is gering ...<lb/>
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- " Vermoeid <del type="crossed out">"</del> <del type="overwritten"><unclear>XX</unclear></del><add place="overwritten">geschreven</add><add place="inline">?</add> <del type="overwritten">i</del><add place="overwritten">I</add>nderdaad "<add place="supralinear">en wat de <unclear>XXX XXX </unclear></add> zuch<del type="overwritten">te</del><add place="overwritten">tte</add> <add place="supralinear"><unclear>XXX</unclear></add> Sheherazade.<lb/>
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<del type="crossed out">Er</del> <del type="overwritten">h</del><add place="overwritten">H</add><unclear>XX</unclear> <add place="supralinear"><unclear>XXX</unclear></add> <del type="overwritten"><unclear>X</unclear></del><add place="overwritten">m</add>ajesteit vergeet dat dit slechts een <lb/>
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straftaak was. <del type="crossed out"><unclear>ergernis</unclear></del><add place="supralinear"><unclear>XXX</unclear></add> &#x2014; <del type="crossed out"><unclear>literatuur</unclear></del>... <add place="infralinear"><unclear> literair</unclear>  ...</add> <add place="supralinear"><unclear>XXX</unclear></add><del type="overwritten">h</del><add type="overwritten">H</add>oogstens: "<lb/>
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" <add place="supralinear">n soort</add> Literatuur als ... Losprijs.<add place="supralinear">"</add>..<lb/>
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<del type="crossed out">Misschien</del><lb/>
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Ik meende dat ge <del type="crossed out"><unclear>al</unclear></del> stilaan genoegen <del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del><add place="supralinear><del type="crossed out">in</del></add><metamark place="supralinear">-</metamark><lb/>
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<add place="marginleft"><del type="crossed out">in waart</del></add> <del type="crossed out">beginnen <unclear>vind</unclear>.</del> hadt <del type="crossed out">in</del> <unclear>gevonden</unclear>. in het <add place="supralinear">dit</add><lb/>
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schrijven <add place="supralinear"><unclear>XXX</unclear></add><del type="crossed out">van die</del><lb/>
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- Genoegen ? - <del type="overwritten"><unclear>X</unclear></del><add place="overwritten">D</add>ie verhaaltjes Sire waren maar <del place="crossed out">de</del><lb/>
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gewaden waarin ik mij hulde "... - Zij <unclear>stond</unclear> recht <lb/>
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<del type="crossed out">trippelde</del><add place="supralinear">stapte</add> <unclear> zwierig</unclear> als een m<del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear>annequin</del> , <del type="crossed out">die</del>
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<del>handen </del> <add>in een mode<del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del>vertoon</add> breide <add place="supralinear"><del type="crossed out">de</del>de</add> als het war <metamark>cirkel rond "als het war(e)</metamark> met <del type="crossed out">de</del> <metamark place="inline">/</metamark><add place="supralinear"><unclear>gratievolle</unclear> armen</add> <del type="crossed out">handen</del> <lb/>
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de panelen van een <unclear>onzichtbaren</unclear> mantel open<del type="overwritten">,</del><add place="overwritten">,</add><lb/>
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gaf een <unclear>benaming</unclear> op ... <add place="supralinear">&#x2014; ...</add>: " Voor U'<unclear>uw</unclear> Genoegen "
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<del type="crossed out">-</del><lb/>
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<del type="crossed out">Shiriar vatte de </del><lb/>
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' Shiriar glimlachte <unclear>terwille</unclear> van de parodie... Ze <unclear>herinnerde</unclear><lb/>
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hem ook <del type="crossed out"><unclear>op</unclear></del><add place="supralinear">aan</add> het <unclear>ceremoniëel</unclear> der haremmeisjes. .. <unclear>XXX</unclear><lb/>
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<add place="marginleft">die <unclear>Tweesprong</unclear></add><del type="crossed out">Dat laatste verh</del>aal was het <del type="crossed out">geen persiflage</del> op<lb/>
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<del type="crossed out">zijn</del> de mislukking van zijn <unclear>eigen</unclear> <del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del><add place="supralinear"><del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del></add><add place="infralinear"><del type="crossed out"><unclear>XXX</unclear></del></add> leven: <unclear>XXX</unclear><lb/>
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hij aan Sheherazade een en ander <unclear>toevertrouwd</unclear> had. <lb/>
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<note> volgende tekst verticaal in de linkse marge</note><lb/>
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<add place="marginleft">Een opmerking nog<lb/>
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" Alleen <unclear>nog</unclear> dit Sheherazade .,<add place="supralinear"><unclear>vooral</unclear></add><metamark place="inline"><note>V</note></metamark> het slot <del type="crossed out">is zeer</del><add place="supralinear"> <unclear>veelal</unclear></add> bevalt me niet het is te <unclear>XXX</unclear><lb/>
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te geforceerd ... Kom, <unclear>schrijf</unclear> <add><unclear>Sheherazade</unclear></add> een ander slot. <lb/>
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&#x2014; ". . <del type="crossed out">Maar</del> <del type="crossed out">Maar</del> de bloknoot is vol ...</add><lb/>

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