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Title: <hi rend="underline">Scenes From a Burglary</hi><lb/>
 
Title: <hi rend="underline">Scenes From a Burglary</hi><lb/>
<num>1</num> Essentially about what the experience is like.<lb/>
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<hi rend="circled"><num>1</num></hi> Essentially about what the experience is like.<lb/>
 
Fear; excitement; guilt; etc<lb/>
 
Fear; excitement; guilt; etc<lb/>
<num>2</num> Fractured : because such an experience would be; and<lb/>
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<hi rend="circled"><num>2</num></hi> Fractured : because such an experience would be; and<lb/>
 
because one doesn’t want just to repeat<lb/>
 
because one doesn’t want just to repeat<lb/>
 
that has been done before so often: a narrative<lb/>
 
that has been done before so often: a narrative<lb/>
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the whole event that I want the reader to <lb/>
 
the whole event that I want the reader to <lb/>
 
be aware of<lb/>
 
be aware of<lb/>
<num>3</num> 1st Reason Ditto: because <retrace>the</retrace> <hi rend="superscript">scene</hi> is him, immediate, experiential in<lb/>
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<hi rend="circled"><num>3</num></hi> 1st Reason Ditto: because <retrace>the</retrace> <add place="supralinear" hand="#AC" rend="pencil" resp="#KA"> scene</add> is him, immediate, experiential in<lb/>
 
quality.
 
quality.

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